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Fleshing Out Your Character Don't be a Mary-Sue Olsen!

#1 User is offline   Devi Icon

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Posted 05 February 2007 - 01:56 AM

This always seems to be the most obsessive point for me. I can't just get up and roleplay. I have to scrutinize over details, which is very sad since much character development comes from the actual experience of roleplaying. But that's beside the point.

Here are some things to answer to develop your character some more. :D You can post here for your answers or just stick it in Word/Notepad.

1. What is your character's main motivation in life?

2. What is one personality trait your character is proud of?

3. What is one personality trait your character dislikes in themselves?

4. What is something that sums up what your character would want engraved on their headstone? (e.g: He was a friend to all.)

5. What is one of your character's deepest fears? How was it realized, or what was one incident where it surfaced?

6. What is a traumatic experience in your character's life, and how has it affected him/her?

7. What is one secret your character would do almost anything to make sure it never goes public?

8. An (obviously drunken) stranger approaches you (meaning, "your character"), confesses his/her true and absolute love for you, and proposes in the midst of the people closest to you.

Yeah, well, it's a start. >_< There are tons more at the following sites:

http://dragonwriting...er-development/
http://www.pgtc.com/...development.htm
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Posted 09 February 2007 - 01:08 PM

Ooh, good questions. I'm going to answer those here. It might also be helpfull for other players to read some more indepth info on the other characters.

1. What is your character's main motivation in life?
Basically to get as much out of life as possible, especially when it comes to making friends etc.

2. What is one personality trait your character is proud of?
Openness to experience (one of the "big five")

3. What is one personality trait your character dislikes?
Agression as a character trait for others; stubbornness as a character trait of herself.

4. What is something that sums up what your character would want engraved on their headstone? (e.g: He was a friend to all.)
Beloved Friend.

5. What is one of your character's deepest fears? How was it realized, or what was one incident where it surfaced?
Daoine is afraid of spiders. She's had it for as long as she can remember.

6. What is a traumatic experience in your character's life, and how has it affected him/her?
The death of first her biological and later her adoptive parents. She's become stronger and more self-disciplined.

7. What is one secret your character would do almost anything to make sure it never goes public?
If she had feelings for a particular man. As much as she likes having lots of friends, she won't easily admit to having more intimate feelings for someone.

8. An (obviously drunken) stranger approaches you (meaning, "your character"), confesses his/her true and absolute love for you, and proposes in the midst of the people closest to you.
Well first of all, being an empath Daoine can probably easily sense whether or not the person is genuine. Then she would gently turn the conversation in another direction to avoid having to go into the proposal at that moment.


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Posted 09 February 2007 - 04:05 PM

Actualy, that's one of the few things I can't do. Personaly, I find doing stuff like doesn't help me in any way whatsoever.

Personaly, I just think up something very basic, eg, name, species, appearance and a word or two that sum up the character and then start roleplaying. The personality developes as it goes.

Sometimes I have a really clear vision of the person's history, which helps, but if I don't generally I develope the history bit by bit. For example, if another person's char said to mine, "are your parents still alive?" sometimes I wouldn't actualy know that about my char, so I'd look at the char and decide wether I wanted his parents to be alive, would it fit. And I remember that peice of information, about a month later I have enough information to build a really structured version.

The only problem with it is to make sure two bits of information don't collide ;) But if you have a good memory and/or notepad, they won't :)
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Posted 09 February 2007 - 09:23 PM

1. What is your character's main motivation in life?
to make her own tribe, to rule her own people

2. What is one personality trait your character is proud of?
Intelligence

3. What is one personality trait your character dislikes?
Snobbish people, Jade can sometimes be a real -squeal- so its ironic

4. What is something that sums up what your character would want engraved on their headstone? (e.g: He was a friend to all.)
"She followed her dreams and touched the stars."

5. What is one of your character's deepest fears? How was it realized, or what was one incident where it surfaced?
She is deathly afraid of things falling under her weight, she had a bad experance and fell through thin ice once.

6. What is a traumatic experience in your character's life, and how has it affected him/her?
She has been seeing more of her past, and shes been getting really caught up in this, secret kind of, these memorys make her wiser. She saw one of her best friends almost dead and that gave her more strength and the will to move on.

7. What is one secret your character would do almost anything to make sure it never goes public?
She gets too deep in her memory, and can remember anything unless in a state of panic.

8. An (obviously drunken) stranger approaches you (meaning, "your character"), confesses his/her true and absolute love for you, and proposes in the midst of the people closest to you.
She would be very confused, and problobly try to walk away, making herself unoticable

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Posted 10 February 2007 - 12:39 AM

Hooray! A response! I've filled out all the questions already (and more), but I'd like to post my answers too. Or at least the ones I can remember, seeing as my document is on a different computer.

1. What is your character's main motivation in life?
Devi's main motivation would be the praise and thanks she gets from other people, either from doing something remarkable or helping people out.

2. What is one personality trait your character is proud of?
She is an extremely ambitious person, and knows and loves it.

3. What is one personality trait your character dislikes in themselves?
She hates that she is a highly sensitive person, and many, many things make her cry that doesn't affect others.

4. What is something that sums up what your character would want engraved on their headstone? (e.g: He was a friend to all.)
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5. What is one of your character's deepest fears? How was it realized, or what was one incident where it surfaced?

6. What is a traumatic experience in your character's life, and how has it affected him/her?

7. What is one secret your character would do almost anything to make sure it never goes public?

8. An (obviously drunken) stranger approaches you (meaning, "your character"), confesses his/her true and absolute love for you, and proposes in the midst of the people closest to you.
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Posted 11 February 2007 - 12:14 PM

Awww, what the heck ^^;

1. What is your character's main motivation in life?
> Just to get pure happiness, and not let her albinoism stand in her way.

2. What is one personality trait your character is proud of?
> She's cultured

3. What is one personality trait your character dislikes in themselves?
> Her indeciciveness

4. What is something that sums up what your character would want engraved on their headstone? (e.g: He was a friend to all.)
> She chose her own destiny

5. What is one of your character's deepest fears? How was it realized, or what was one incident where it surfaced?


6. What is a traumatic experience in your character's life, and how has it affected him/her?


7. What is one secret your character would do almost anything to make sure it never goes public?

8. An (obviously drunken) stranger approaches you (meaning, "your character"), confesses his/her true and absolute love for you, and proposes in the midst of the people closest to you.
>Alieh would probably smile and pretend to go along with it, while leading him (or her, GROSS) to the nearest police station for pick up by relatives :) Then go home and shower (lol)
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Posted 23 February 2007 - 05:15 AM

1. What is your character's main motivation in life?
To find her purpose. Whether that is to fall in love, or to change the world, it doesn't matter. As long as she's certain that she's found what she was meant to do.

2. What is one personality trait your character is proud of?
Her independence. She's not afraid to do as she pleases, even though this kind of annoys people. A lot.

3. What is one personality trait your character dislikes in themselves?
Her temper/mouth. Mahesa tends to run off at the mouth a little too often, and she also has a rather nasty temper- two icky things that don't really help her out too much in life.

4. What is something that sums up what your character would want engraved on their headstone? (e.g: He was a friend to all.)
'Forever a song, lilting down the years'

5. What is one of your character's deepest fears? How was it realized, or what was one incident where it surfaced?
Mahesa's greatest fear is probably leading an unfulfilled life. When she was stabbed, she was ready to give up, but her one nagging thought was that she hadn't done so many things she'd wanted to. Wasting her life had never been a high goal, and it never will be.

6. What is a traumatic experience in your character's life, and how has it affected him/her?
Probably the worst moment in Mahesa's life was her near-death status for several weeks. She hadn't been sure whether she was going to survive or not, and it made her realize how much she had left to do.

7. What is one secret your character would do almost anything to make sure it never goes public?
Mahesa really doesn't have any deep, dark secrets- she's too open for that. But if anything, she wants to keep her family, and her past on the dl. She's trying to forget about them, and constantly being reminded about them won't ease the pain.

8. An (obviously drunken) stranger approaches you (meaning, "your character"), confesses his/her true and absolute love for you, and proposes in the midst of the people closest to you.
Mahesa would undoubtedly freak out, and run away. She may know how to handle a sword, but she can be a bit of a coward in public confrontations. She gets embarassed too easily.

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Posted 18 March 2007 - 07:29 PM

Awesome list. :]

1. What is your character's main motivation in life?

The typical. Grow rich, powerful. :\

2. What is one personality trait your character is proud of?
Being stoic. He tries not to let his emotions dictate what he does.

3. What is one personality trait your character dislikes in themselves?
Easily swayed by pretty women. >___>

4. What is something that sums up what your character would want engraved on their headstone? (e.g: He was a friend to all.)
A demon is Forever.

5. What is one of your character's deepest fears? How was it realized, or what was one incident where it surfaced?
Dying. Ilire dislikes the idea of leaving loose ends, and of course the whole 'dead' bit. His mother was mortally injured in a bizarre accident that involved a car, a cow, and three tulips (don't ask) and died in his arms at the hospital.

6. What is a traumatic experience in your character's life, and how has it affected him/her?
Ilire got beaten up by an angel. A female angel.

7. What is one secret your character would do almost anything to make sure it never goes public?
He was in love with the angel that beat him up.

8. An (obviously drunken) stranger approaches you (meaning, "your character"), confesses his/her true and absolute love for you, and proposes in the midst of the people closest to you.

Smirk, then (after rifling through their pockets for cash) ditch them at the nearest hotel. Drunk people have a habit of upchucking on him an awful lot.
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