[Alain]

I doubt we'll actually need an OOC for every single chapter, but I figured I'd at least make something easy to see for anyone else who might want one/needs ideas. Feel free to edit the title at your own will Emma.

And my character begins by being a censored. Then again, it was needed, so... --also, I tried to keep it relatively short and sweet; though, I don't believe my post contributed much more for anyone to post about than the intro already had. Lemme know if any edits are necessary.

[Xanth]

Ah, this is a good idea, David. I think the title's perfect.

Don't knock yourself short on your post. I know you're used to a length with more detail but I think in a plot like this, faster-paced action is important for keeping the story moving at the kind of pace we'll need, and your post does it's thing: Alain's interrupted their argument, possibly preventing their group from being discovered, and put forth a plan of action the others can either choose to ignore or agree with when they post.

[Alain]

Xanth, on 02 July 2012 - 03:20 AM, said:

Ah, this is a good idea, David. I think the title's perfect.

Don't knock yourself short on your post. I know you're used to a length with more detail but I think in a plot like this, faster-paced action is important for keeping the story moving at the kind of pace we'll need, and your post does it's thing: Alain's interrupted their argument, possibly preventing their group from being discovered, and put forth a plan of action the others can either choose to ignore or agree with when they post.

I posted a shorter post for that very reason. I try to make the post/post intervals fit the action, but sometimes fail. Good to know it succeeds in doing it's thing/sends Alain off for another post or two. And that Jericho succeeded in getting a miffed Misha from doing something silly. Though now that Jericho is in the mind of a younger member, what will his next step be from there?

And two other things. For one, gotta point out that Jericho's right on the preparation—someone might want that flask of whiskey Alain has. The other thing would be that though Rahil is now approved—I won't sign him up til Chapter Two in all likelihood. At this point his smelly butt would be sent off twenty feet away and only make Misha like "what the—? D<" Meanwhile Rahil's aides would've done everything interaction-wise since he has only a basic understanding of Elysian language, plus the whole contacted Alexandrian government in his profile mixes perfectly with Alain's post methinks.

Status of Fae Forest guide: Knocked out by Stinkypoorotten eggs

[Alain]

Eh, might as well change it to the general OOC, I suppose.

I tried to leave it off so that someone else gets to decide how much Alain gets beat up, so have fun with that. My post still feels bleh, but it gets what it needs to done and doesn't need further postpone-ing due to my anal tendencies. Should be able to post another NPC post by now, too, given the double mention of Malaki reinforcements by now.